Saturday 14 November 2015

The Man Booker Prize Shortlist 2014: A Personal View

So I've finally got around to finishing the shortlist for the 2014 ManBooker Prize, and offer below my own thoughts on the list.

We Are All Completely Beside Ourselves – Karen Joy Fowler
8/10
Easily the shortest and smallest book on the list, this is an almost pocket-sized punch of an idea between two covers. The 'big reveal' is about halfway through (though can be guessed earlier), so to discuss it rather gives away a point on which the plot hinges, but let's just say: it's a game-changer. At the centre of this one is an issue that gets quite divisive, and your opinion quite possible depends on which polarised end of that (unspecified by me) debate your sympathy falls on. But the novel's well-written, full of heart, with an engaging, female protagonist-narrator, a smattering of science and comes in at just the right length.

J – Howard Jacobson
6/10
The residents of Jacobson's novel live in a fuzzy, blurry sort of world, in the aftermath (two generations ago) of some cataclysmic social event that may or may not have happened, and of which no one speaks except in the vaguest of terms, always couched with caveats. Apologies are a way of life, a golden rule in this society that either has offended someone deeply, or hasn't at all but might. At first, that vagueness was attractive, it allowed the unnamed event to stand for any awkward past circumstance – increasingly, for any genocide or cultural exploitation. But, after a while, it grated on me. Other reviewers complain that there weren't enough details for them, and I get that, but I also get that the lack of detail is deliberate and kind of important; there's a quest for understanding here, and a deep-seated paranoia that makes more sense in a context of a society that doesn't really understand or trust itself. Overall, this one's kind of bleak, without much to redeem or relieve that.

The Lives Of Others – Neel Mukherjee
6/10
This all felt a bit familiar. Like 2013's shortlisted The Lowland, this is about a family in late 1960s Calcutta that is torn apart by a son who runs away to join the Communist/Maoist Naxalite rebellion. There are other similarities, but those would be spoilers. The big difference is that The Lives of Others takes as its theme the conflict between classes and castes in India, rather than the fallout of abandoning a family as The Lowland does. To that end, Mukherjee gives us an elongated slice of life in an upper-middle-class Indian family in decline, something with the generational scope of an epic but the intimate personal portraits of a life in miniature. Unfortunately, this feels like it's twice as long as The Lowland, and really needn't be. By the middle third, it had started to get interesting, but by the final third I found myself sympathising with the dying grandfather and grateful that he (and I) wouldn't be around much longer to share his family's decline. There are quite a few characters to keep track of, often the same ones at different ages too, and by the end I didn't feel like the emotional involvement I had with any of them justified the length of time it took to reach the story's conclusion.

To Rise Again At A Decent Hour – Joshua Ferris
7/10
Inevitably this one has some overlap with J, but here the Holocaust is specifically invoked by name. Invoked over and over again, in a story that's as much about what can cause offence to the Jewish community (and who counts as Jewish in the first place) as it is about a New York dentist with problems adjusting to modern society. But it's a book that takes it all with a lightness of touch that sits at odds with the dark comedy (this dentist is pretty fatalistic) and the existential void at the heart of the narrator's life. That's not to say the Holocaust is made light of (in fact, the mere suggestion of doing so is greeting with horror), but rather that the tone never gets maudlin. There's an exploration of doubt and alienation from (but wanting to join in with) the modern world that takes the odd angle of an obscure lost tribe of Biblical times, in a way that feels at once believable and yet slightly improbable. The narrator is perhaps of that sort that appeals to middle-aged men looking for their sense of purpose, but he is at least plausible, likeable in his own way, and well-refined; his flaws make him, and they get in his way but they are deeply human. So, in the end, maybe it's a white, middle-aged man's book about not really 'getting' modern society (in, of course, New York City), and maybe there are plenty of books already like that, but this one is darkly funny and has a deeply-flawed human at its centre.

How To Be Both – Ali Smith
7/10
Bit of a double-hander, this one, being divided into two distinct but complementary narratives. There's the story of an Italian fresco-painter from the 1400s somehow transported into an unfamiliar modern-day 'purgatorium', and there's the story of George, a modern teenage girl suffering a recent bereavement. Some versions of the published book start with the fresco-painter, Franchesco del Cossa, and some start with George – which Smith claims means there are two ways to read the novel, and you're stuck with whichever you read first. The book can, sort of, be both, but you only get one first time. Mine started with del Cossa (who, thanks to historical ambiguity, gets to be both male and female, in a way that George's name only hints at), which seems to make more sense, but then I suppose it would, to me. The two stories work independently, but it felt like reading George second shed light on the occasional moments of overlap in del Cossa's story, in a way that wouldn't have happened the other way around. Besides, I suspected that del Cossa's bit would feel like an attempt at presenting one of George's school projects if I'd read her part first. Some reviews have suggested that both parts could be standalone novels, and I think that might be true, although I'd be far more interested in del Cossa's novel – with all its historical fill-in-the-blanks biography and fluid style following the tradition of Wolf Hall and Bring Up The Bodies (2009 and 2012 winners) – than George's, which comes across as rather more of a contemporary teen girl coming-of-age story.

The Narrow Road To The Deep North – Richard Flanagan
7/10
With a plot focused on a Japanese POW camp on the notorious Death Railway in Burma, this one was never going to be cheerful. Occasionally, it has a nod at the idea of something uplifting, but always manages to temper that with the far more realistic notion that freedom might not always be freedom. Or rather, the thread running through this whole book is that freedom might not be all it's cracked up to be, and that, arguably, the survivors never truly escape the camp – those few years act as a magnet for the rest of their lives and especially when, in old age, they look back on their lives. Flanagan's quite even-handed with the Japanese and Korean guards, allowing them more humanity and depth than might be expected – how easy it would have been to make them unthinking brutes and borderline psychopaths – and giving them endings that reflect a nuanced portrayal of the losers as well as the victors (hint: nobody really comes out of Burma well). But it's not all gloom and incarceration; there's a few people trapped in loveless marriages too. The mosaic of a plot darts around here there and everywhere, but that generally works and gives an impression of the older man reflecting on a life lived in the shadow of that railway, despite everything that's happened before and after. It's a novel with some depth, and some depths of human suffering, but it's not exactly enjoyable.

So, which would I have given the prize to? The rules simply state that the prize goes to 'the best novel in the opinion of the judges', ie. me. Initially I'd say it's perhaps a four-way race between We Are All Completely Beside Ourselves, To Rise Again at a Decent Hour, How to be Both and The Narrow Road to the Deep North. I guess that's because J and The Lives of Others, though they have their undoubted merits, weren't so much fun to read (or rather, their redeeming features weren't enough to lift them above the slog of reading them). J had compelling ideas, if clouded and disguised, and The Lives of Others was an immersive saga, if somehow lacking something intangible, but I had to make myself keep going with both, and that does not a good novel-reading experience make.
Compare the length of The Lives of Others with the short punchiness of How to be Both and We are all..., and for that matter the fogginess (sometimes literally) of J, with the clarity and, I guess, the zip of We are all.... Even the almost equally lengthy Narrow Road had more emotional clout than The Lives of Others, and that might simply have been down to structure; Flanagan hits you early and often, whereas Mukherjee lets it build, from different angles, for so long that I sort of stopped caring before the big finale.
To Rise Again... is fun and light and still tackles some big issues, but I can't help thinking that what makes it so readable – for me, at least – is probably also its weakness. One more novel about a rich white guy in New York (yipee), and it's intellectual bits are all blunted off by the lightly comic tone and setting. Is this 'serious' enough to win the Man Booker? Is it 'the best' of these four? I'm not sure.
Narrow Road is certainly serious enough, with enough emotional and intellectual clout to justify its length, for me at least. Historical novels have a good recent track record. So I guess I can see why Narrow Road won. But. For me, I think I have to enjoy a novel a bit more than this for it to be 'the best'.
I have to find it fun (not all of the time, necessarily), and not just appreciate the artistry, the story-telling and the plot structuring, the characterisation (which actually isn't all that hot beyond the main couple of characters). I want a bit of humour, somewhere – it doesn't have to make me laugh, I'm fine with the dry stuff. I want to feel some human warmth. I want a bit of variety of emotion – Narrow Road is pretty unremitting; it's either the bleak battle-for-survival in Burma or the bleak loneliness of post-war Australia and Japan. I want some intellectual stimulation, I want something thought-provoking, something I can talk to people about and that will spark conversations beyond the finer points of the plot.
Which brings me to We are all... and How to be Both. I felt both of these had all of those things. Perhaps coincidentally, they were also the shortest two on the list, and I think that is to their advantage. That's not because I can't hack a long book (maybe I can't), but I do tend to feel a longer book requires more of an investment from a reader, and so ought to reward that, ought to justify and repay that extra investment and ought to make use of the extra two or three hundred pages. I much prefer the book that can tell a story swiftly and cleanly and blow my mind or break my heart in a hit-and-run to the protracted and drawn-out sprawl of thousands of pages that go nowhere, or get to the same place as the shorter work in twice the time.
Interestingly, and possibly also coincidentally, both are also the only two shortlisted works by women. Make of that what you will.
Both books tell good stories well, and both have compelling ideas. Both cram in varieties of emotion (although the grief in George's half of How to be Both can get a bit wearing), and both have their moments of humour. They do this with a lightness of touch that make J seem heavy-handed, and To Rise Again... seem almost pure tone, devoid of ideas. I enjoyed them both as pieces of art and as things to read more than the others on the list, and I think on my list of things I want from a novel, these two are – objectively – the best.
Ultimately, I'd have to say that We are all Completely Beside Ourselves is probably my favourite. It edges out How to be Both for the clarity of its ideas, and maybe also the engaging narrator, who just seems a bit more approachable to me than the two in How to be Both. I admit, there might also be something about How to be Both that both puts me off and reminds me of 2013's winner, The Luminaries: this book might be too clever for me. In opinion of this judge (as it were), that doesn't quite make for 'the best' novel either.

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